Difference between revisions of "Talk:Illnesses"

Revision as of 22:57, 11 May 2014

Wording

The opening section, while descriptive and awesome, could really use shortening; there is much extrapolation and flowery speech that could be condensed to be more practical and to-the-point. In addition, the original opening paragraph described the way that "diseases", "disorders" and "injuries" do not represent in-game jargon, but are rather community-invented words, which is missing from this incarnation.

Also, the nature of each type of illness has already been described in each category's opening statement; I'm not sure if this needs to be repeated in the introductory section. — ividyon (talk) 05:48, 10 February 2014 (MST) --Sulik (talk) 14:56, 18 February 2014 (MST)

Illnesses caused by death

Do we really need the distinction between "witnessing death" and actively "killing someone"? -Vio (talk) 16:23, 11 May 2014 (MDT)

Please create new sections when opening a new discussion thread. And no, I don't think we do. — ividyon (talk) 16:57, 11 May 2014 (MDT)

Syphilis is missing

[1] Don't know how I got it though.