Difference between revisions of "Talk:Illnesses"
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Wording
The opening section, while descriptive and awesome, could really use shortening; there is much extrapolation and flowery speech that could be condensed to be more practical and to-the-point. In addition, the original opening paragraph described the way that "diseases", "disorders" and "injuries" do not represent in-game jargon, but are rather community-invented words, which is missing from this incarnation. — 
ividyon (talk) 05:48, 10 February 2014 (MST)
