http://www.mushpedia.com/api.php?action=feedcontributions&feedformat=atom&user=NeroaelousMushpedia - User contributions [en]2026-07-15T15:58:00ZUser contributionsMediaWiki 1.23.6http://www.mushpedia.com/wiki/Talk:IllnessesTalk:Illnesses2014-05-19T04:59:50Z<p>Neroaelous: /* Syphilis is missing */</p>
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<div>== Wording ==<br />
The opening section, while descriptive and awesome, could really use shortening; there is much extrapolation and flowery speech that could be condensed to be more practical and to-the-point. In addition, the original opening paragraph described the way that "diseases", "disorders" and "injuries" do not represent in-game jargon, but are rather community-invented words, which is missing from this incarnation.<br />
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Also, the nature of each type of illness has already been described in each category's opening statement; I'm not sure if this needs to be repeated in the introductory section. — [[Image:Kuanti.png|link=User:Ividyon|Designer]] [[User:Ividyon|<span style="color:#d47c2b; font-weight: bold; text-shadow: 1px 1px 0px #000;">ividyon</span>]] ([[User talk:Ividyon|talk]]) 05:48, 10 February 2014 (MST)<br />
--[[User:Sulik|Sulik]] ([[User talk:Sulik|talk]]) 14:56, 18 February 2014 (MST)<br />
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== Illnesses caused by death ==<br />
Do we really need the distinction between "witnessing death" and actively "killing someone"? -[[User:Vio|Vio]] ([[User talk:Vio|talk]]) 16:23, 11 May 2014 (MDT)<br />
:Please create new sections when opening a new discussion thread. And no, I don't think we do. — [[Image:Kuanti.png|link=User:Ividyon|Designer]] [[User:Ividyon|<span style="color:#d47c2b; font-weight: bold; text-shadow: 1px 1px 0px #000;">ividyon</span>]] ([[User talk:Ividyon|talk]]) 16:57, 11 May 2014 (MDT)<br />
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==Syphilis is missing==<br />
[http://snag.gy/JX10a.jpg]<br />
Don't know how I got it though.<br />
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I got it from a predator fight that we had a lower combat score on. Really quite a strange way to get it. -Neroaelous</div>Neroaeloushttp://www.mushpedia.com/wiki/Talk:IllnessesTalk:Illnesses2014-05-19T04:59:33Z<p>Neroaelous: /* Syphilis is missing */</p>
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<div>== Wording ==<br />
The opening section, while descriptive and awesome, could really use shortening; there is much extrapolation and flowery speech that could be condensed to be more practical and to-the-point. In addition, the original opening paragraph described the way that "diseases", "disorders" and "injuries" do not represent in-game jargon, but are rather community-invented words, which is missing from this incarnation.<br />
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Also, the nature of each type of illness has already been described in each category's opening statement; I'm not sure if this needs to be repeated in the introductory section. — [[Image:Kuanti.png|link=User:Ividyon|Designer]] [[User:Ividyon|<span style="color:#d47c2b; font-weight: bold; text-shadow: 1px 1px 0px #000;">ividyon</span>]] ([[User talk:Ividyon|talk]]) 05:48, 10 February 2014 (MST)<br />
--[[User:Sulik|Sulik]] ([[User talk:Sulik|talk]]) 14:56, 18 February 2014 (MST)<br />
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== Illnesses caused by death ==<br />
Do we really need the distinction between "witnessing death" and actively "killing someone"? -[[User:Vio|Vio]] ([[User talk:Vio|talk]]) 16:23, 11 May 2014 (MDT)<br />
:Please create new sections when opening a new discussion thread. And no, I don't think we do. — [[Image:Kuanti.png|link=User:Ividyon|Designer]] [[User:Ividyon|<span style="color:#d47c2b; font-weight: bold; text-shadow: 1px 1px 0px #000;">ividyon</span>]] ([[User talk:Ividyon|talk]]) 16:57, 11 May 2014 (MDT)<br />
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==Syphilis is missing==<br />
[http://snag.gy/JX10a.jpg]<br />
Don't know how I got it though.<br />
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I got it from a predator fight that we had a lower combat score on. Really quite a strange way to get it.</div>Neroaelous